my fd5 story idea

[Erin_Mckinley01]

im writing a fd5 fanfic.it will be in progress once i finish my fd4 one(me and my friends).

it is around the middle of september and Jimmy Hawthorne and his friend,Chad Campbell are heading off to california.Chad is so excited,the only thing on his mind is how many hotties will meet.Jimmy just wants to get away from Oregon.While on the way,Jimmy has a premonition of the train crashing,killing him,Chad and 6 others.Jimmy,chad and the 6 get off the train,they think Jimmy is on crack or something,but then find out that the train they got off crashed.

cast:(edited)

Jimmy O'Leary
Chad Waters
Arron Myers
Heather Collins
Zack Fallcon
Tatum Mckinley
Allison Waggner
Mark Pettus


im still wroking on fd4 and im doing a new one,Riverwood:School of the Dead

After a school meeting,junior students discover their teachers became zombies.think of it as a sequel to The Faculty

[Moi]

I cant wait to read these scripts! lol <evil2> <clueless>

[Erin_Mckinley01]

here is what i got so far for fd5,its not that great:

It was a warm August morning and Jimmy and his friend,Chad were on their way to the train station to California.They both piled into Chad's pick-up truck and were on there way.

"Man,California,its gonna be great man."Chad said.
"Yeah,cant wait to get there."Jimmy said.
"Just think,sun,surf and sand...and all those hot babes on the beach.Just makes me itch when I think about it"Chad said.
Jimmy laughed.
"And of course it is means two weeks away from here."Jimmy added."Oragon seems too cold.Even in the summer."
"Yeah,hopefully we can get some hot babe's number before we have to come back here."Chad said.
"Yeah.How much longer til we get to the train station?"Jimmy asked.
"About half an hour if we dont get any red lights."Chad responed.
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Half an hour later,Chad and Jimmy arrived at the train station.It was packed that day.hundreds of people flocked the building to get good seats on the trains to there final destinations.

"What train are we suppost to be on,Chad?"asked Jimmy.
Chad looked at his train ticket.
"Hmm...Train 180."Chad replied.

Jimmy and Chad looked around for their train.Then they went up to a ticket collecter.

"Excuse me,but where is train 180?"Chad asked.
"It's right behind you,sir."the ticket collecter said.
"Thank you."Chad said.

Chad and Jimmy passed their luggage to the train conducter who placed it in a compartment along with the other luggage bags.Chad and Jimmy climbed aboard the train and grabbed two open seats in the back.

Jimmy looked over at Chad and he had this excited expression on his face.

"This is gonna be so awesome!"Chad exclaimed.
"Yeah I know."Jimmy said dully.

Chad could tell Jimmy wasnt very excited.Why shouldnt he?I mean they were going to california.Anyone would be excited to go.Especially Chad.Hot girls were the only thing that ran throught his mind.Why wasnt that the same for Jimmy?

Around 11pm,other passengers started boarding.Jimmy peered above the seats in fron tohim and saw a goth couple come on.Jimmy remebered meeting them at the Portland High School Bonfire from last year.Zack Fallcon was a sharp kid.He was a cool goth and friend to everyone at the high school.Everyone alwayts called him Ian Mckinley because he matched Ian completely.His shaggy black hair covered is green eyes.Zack's girlfriend Tatum Mckinley,was a pretty,smart goth.Tatum had a hard time since her brother Ian,and her friend,Erin died in Mckinley,Pennslyvania.Everytime someone mentioned the word 'Mckinley','Ulmer'or 'Rollarcoaster',Tatum would burst in tears.When Ian interduced Erin to Tatum,Tatum and Erin were best friends.She was crushed when Ian came home in tears when Erin died.Tatum said it was like losing a member of the family.Tatum's life turned upside-down when Ian died.She has been pretty quiet since the Tri-Centenial in July.Tatum and Zack sat in the seats in front of Chad and Jimmy.Another couple boarded the train.Jimmy could tell who it was when he heard them boarding.It was Arron Myers and Heather Collins.Arron and Heather were your typical popular couple.Arron was the all-american jock and Heather was the all-american beauty.Everyone thinks Arron is related to Carter Horton since he acts like him,like a clone.Arron was a a**hole,but is really a nice guy.His blue eyes,brown hair, and perfect tan made him the hottest guy in Portland High.Heather is definetly the a hottie to every guy in Portland.Her long blonde hair and her perewinkle eyes,truely made her a beauty.A girl had also boarded the train.It took Jimym a while to relieze who it was,but it was Allison Waggner.Allison lost it when her brother,George died on Flight 180,she thought it was over,at least she had her brother Tod.Allison was frightened when she saw her brother dead in the tub.She went crazy thinking her brother commited suicide.Allsion sat beside Zack and Tatum and started a conversationg.Mark Pettus was the last on on the train.Mark was a sensitive guy.He loves poetry and loves to write his own poems and songs for is band,'Yamba Jamba'.Even though he was a sensitive guy,he wasnt gay or girly.mark has a girlfriend and a family back in his hometown of Vancouver.Mark sat with Allison and talking on his Razor phone.

Then the train horn blared.

"Welcome to Portland Train Stations,im Larry,your conducter for today.We are now boarding train 180 to Erueka,California.So please do not stick hand or feet out the windows.Thank you."

The doors closed and the train moved forward.Jimmy stared out the window watching as they left the train station.Jimmy sighed and rested his head back.

"You ok,Jim?"Chad asked.
"Yeah...I'm fine"Jimmy replied back.

Chad shruged and rested his head on a pillow.

Zack up front was banging on the seat with his drumsticks and the jock was tossing a football up in the air.Tatum was just reading a magazine and the Heather was talking away on her cellphone.Mark was looking through his cds and Jimmy looked at the girl beside Chad and she was staring out her window,spaced out.

Up ahead,the wind started to pick up and started blowing on a tree.The tree's branches began to shake and moving in all directions.One branch fell forwards and hooked on to the emergency break that controlled the tracks.the brank pulled back and the tracks began to split.As the branch pulled back,the branch became weaker and the break was pulled back even more.Then the branch snapped and the break remained in place,the tracks were half split.

Back behind,Jimmy gazed out his window,staring at the clouds as the sun began to vanish and the fluffy,white clouds grew darker.

"Looks like its gonna rain,baby."Heather said.
"Oh well."Arron."Maybe it will clear up."

Suddenly,the clouds became dark and it started to rain heavily.

"Aw,man!"Chad exclaimed.

Suddenly,the train began to shake.Everyone grabbed onto the arm rests or their partners and were in terror.

"What's happening?"Tatum screamed.

The wheels began to make a screeching sound,like nails grinding on a chalkboard.Sparks were flying and some wheels flew off.One of the wheels shattared throught the window and the wheel pelted Arron in his left temple,the wheel made a crunching sound as it smashed into his skull.The shattared glass also impaled his girlfriend and one ripped through her throut.she was screaming in pain as blood splattered the goth couple beside them.

Arron screamed in pain

"Jason!"Heather cried,with the last bit of strenght she had left.

Arron and Heather fell over into the asile.

"Omg!Zack exclaimed."

Tatum began to cry on his shouldar.

The train continued the shake violently.Sparks hit the sides of the train,causing small holes to appear.The goth couple began to be pulled away and Tatum was being pulled the force.The part of the train ripped apart,sending the goth couple flying out of the train.Tatum flew into a branch and was impladed throught her strenum.Zack flew and hit his head off the tree.He looked at his dead girlfriend drangle from above him and let out a cry.The vibrations from his impact caused the tree to fall forward.He was too slow to react and the screamed as the tree fell on top of him and his sound of crushing bone terrifyed the others.

"Holy $h!t!"Jimmy screamed.

The train began to shake violently,sparks were flying everywhere.The train was going off the tracks and slammed into a pole.The pole sliced into the train and into Heather,and Arron who were dead on the ground,Allison and Mark.THe train swearved off the tracks and stopped beside a canyon.

"That was close!"Chad cried.

Then there was a sound.Chad and Jimmy Turned back,the Caboose was coming for them.Chad and Jimmy screamed and the caboose slammed into the them.the train cart began to fall fast and smashed into the rocks,implaing Chad and Jimmy in the head.
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Jimmy looked around in a cold sweat.

"Welcome to Portland Train Stations,im Larry,your conducter for today.We are now boarding train 180 to Erueka,California.So please do not stick hand or feet out the windows.Thank you."

"No!"Jimmy screamed.

"Whats wrong,dude?"asked Chad.

"The train...its gonna crash!!!"Jimmy hollarded.

"Dude,wtf is your problem?"Arron questioned.

"This isnt funny,Jimmy."Heather said.

"Im not joking!Its gonna crash and were all gonna die!"Jimmy screamed loudly.

the train conducter came out.

"whats going on?"he asked

"Im sorry,my friend is just over-excited about going to california"Chad anwsered.

"No!The train is gonna crash!"Jimmy screamed and was starting to cry a bit.

"Dude,knock it off!"Zack hollarded."Your scaring my girlfriend."

"Are you on drugs or something?"Tatum asked.

"Im not joking!"Jimmy said.

"Jimmy,im not gonna hve you ruin my two weeks."Mark said.

Jason jumped over his girlfriend and started beating up on Jimmy.The girlfriend came to break it up.Sucertiy came and took Jimmy,Jason off.Heather and Chad followed suit.The goth couple was getting bothered by the whole thing and got off.Allison and Mark followed Zack and Tatum of the train and sat in chairs.

"Dude,what happened?"Chad asked.

"I told you..."Jimmy started."The train crashed and we all died."

"Oh,will you shut up,Jimmy."Zack said."We got taken off"

"Shut up,Senor Ian Mckinley,you GOT off!" Arron said.

Tatum started to cry on Zack's shouldar.

"Shut up Arron!"Zack hollared.

Jason glared at Jimmy and Zack,coldly.

"I cant believe we are missing the concert."Heather said.

"Me too.My whole week is ruined!"Mark said.

"I cant believe I got thrown off the train because of you."Arron said coldly,pointing at Jimmy.

"I saved your life!"Jimmy said."I saved all our lives!"

Everyone rolled their eyes.

"Whatever."Tatum said,wiping away her tears.

A gaurd came in.

"Ok,lets just get you kids home."he said,leading them to the van outside.

In the van,everyone stared at Jimmy.

"What!?"Jimmy said.

"You ruined my week,Hawthorne."Arron said.

"I saved us!"Jimmy said."If I wasnt on that train,you would be dead,Arron.

"Bull****!"Arron exclaimed."I control my life,not you."

"Someone is a Horton today."Mark teased.

"Shut up Pettus!"Arron said.

"Make me!"Mark said.

"Dont do it,baby"Heather said to Arron.

Arron glaced at Heather and kept his cool.

Tatum sat quietly beside Zack and looked at a photo album with her,Ian,Erin and Zack as he stroked her long black hair.Tears came up and Zack hugged Tatum to make her feel better.

Then there was a loud sound outside.

"Whats happening?"Heather asked.

Arron peered out the window.

"Holy ****..."he said.

Arron and everyone got out of the van,to see a train crashing.

"That's our train!"Chad cried.

Everyone stared at Jimmy.Heather,Tatum and Allison were crying on their boyfriends shouldars.Arron gave Jimmy a cold stare and was about to rip his arms off.Mark hugged Allison,Zack held Tatum tight.And Chad stared at Jimmy in shock.Jimmy just stared at the trainwreak,shocked.